Narrative

The lake glistened in the sunlight as we walked along the path. The boats whizzed passed us towing exited passengers who squealed in delight. The lovely breeze refreshed us. The smell of sausages and onions on the BBQ wafted along to us.

Suddenly a big brown snake jumped out at me and almost bit my foot. "Run!" yelled mum. We all ran as fast as we could. My heart raced. I shivered in fear.